Feud: with rey-mysterio

****rey-mysterio you can change your lines if you want. i dont knw if your face or heel nor your profile.

// The story rotates between who among us is stronger. We both see each other training in the same gym in the past yrs. Having the same type (Str Type). The competetion is a friendly one or it can be end up bad as it forwards. Ill update this post and edit some so feel free to suggest whats on your mind. I hope you have read this.


Part 1 (possibly for 1st match)
//status= DONE
//Title: Strength for a Strength

Kaiser is having an interview based on his successful debut match in the backstage.

Reporter: Good evening SCW Fans! Lets interview and welcome our new wrestler for SCW, Kaiser!

Kaiser: (with a smile on his face) Hello! Thanks for your warm welcome!

Reporter: Congratulations on your successful debut matach against Power! That was a good fight you brought up their! What can we expect about you here on SCW?

(camera focuses on Kaiser)

Kaiser: Well, Power is a good wrestler but not enough for me. Expect more one-of-a-kind moves that will explode in the ring!

Reporter: What can you say about our wrestlers here in SCW?

Kaiser: They are friendly people, some of them i got started to befriend with. But when we are inside the ring, its just bussiness, ill give everything i have, with my guts and power i can see that i will dominate and willl be the strongest SCW wrestler in all time.

(audience making noise while rey-mysterio is beside Kaiser looking at him)

rey-mysterio: I know you! i see you a lot training at the same gym where i used to train. (intimidated about Kaiser's short interview) You said about dominating SCW? I don't think so! You sure looks like a good wrestler to show them of the Strength of rey-mysterio! How about a contest between us! To see who's the stronger wrestler between the two of us!

Kaiser: Who...? Anyway, i like that! Ill make you a good subject on how Kaiser fight and dominate anyone in the ring! Your on man!

(The two wrestler stares at each other while the camera focus between them as the screen fades away)


-part 1 done ready for a match-

good start Kaiser keep going on this path

thanks man !

You have a good roleplay set up, I may have to have everyone submit it like you do with the //status= and //Title:

Also the grammar is alright, but you need capitals in the right places and include ' (example: I'll instead of Ill)

With this sentence:

Kaiser: Well, Power is a good wrestler but not enough for me. Expect more one of a kind Kaiser moves that will explode in the ring!

I was thinking of changing to:

Kaiser: Well, Power is a good wrestler but not enough for me. Expect more one-of-a-kind moves that will explode in the ring!

thanks! ok i will do that next time!

suggestion noted and taken ^^